Wednesday, September 2, 2015

BIRD'S WINGS

8:58 PM    30 comments

whenever you want to fly

whenever you want to sit on a branch

no need to be scared of the storm

no need to be afraid of the broken branch

you give all your trust on your wings

and makes me realize

no matter how hard life is

no matter how many obstacles I'll face

all I need is to believe in my self

"feathers and fancy" by Katya Horner of Slight Clutter Photography. Find her on Etsy.com:

30 comments:

  1. Yustinus CalvinSeptember 7, 2015 at 11:23 PM

    I know you can do it! :-)
    Keep doing your best
    Thanks Mega

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  2. UnknownSeptember 8, 2015 at 8:00 AM

    Mega, your poem is an artistic for me :-D
    You're using a great words and I like this kind of poem too
    I'll wish I can see a great next poem from you that use a great words yet easy to understand
    Thank you for your poem Mega :-D

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 9, 2015 at 8:28 PM

      thank you for your nice comment JJ, I'll take these as a compliment. I'm waiting for your next poem too, Jesus bless you :D

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2015 at 12:45 AM

    Megaa your poem is make me feel full of spirit ! Keep strong megaaa !! :)

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 9, 2015 at 8:32 PM

      really? make sure that you have more spirit after read my poem anin :p thanks for the comment :D

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  4. AnonymousSeptember 9, 2015 at 12:45 AM

    Megaa your poem is make me feel full of spirit ! Keep strong megaaa !! :)

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  5. AngellaprillySeptember 9, 2015 at 2:13 AM

    more spirit , more inspired after reading your poem :D continue it Kabebeeee :*

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 9, 2015 at 8:37 PM

      thanks angel, hope this will inspire many people too! :D kabebe? a new nickname for me? :p

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    2. AngellaprillySeptember 16, 2015 at 2:30 AM

      Hahaha , I was excited to call you Kabeb :p

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  6. Rachmawati JatiningrumSeptember 9, 2015 at 8:01 AM

    mega your poem really motivate me, that good motivation poem, I like it :)

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 9, 2015 at 8:38 PM

      I didn't expect if my poem will be a motivate for someone, thx for the compliment Rachma :D

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  7. VeSeptember 9, 2015 at 5:21 PM

    Beatiful poem :)

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  8. UnknownSeptember 9, 2015 at 9:26 PM

    Your poem really inspiring, bangsa! I hope that you'll get more confident to face all your obstacles. Good luck

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 10, 2015 at 4:42 AM

      so many comments from you Vio hahaha :D I really hope so, amen! the same wish for you and tons of luck for you too :D

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  9. UnknownSeptember 9, 2015 at 9:26 PM

    Your poem really inspiring, bangsa! I hope that you'll get more confident to face all your obstacles. Good luck

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  10. UnknownSeptember 9, 2015 at 9:26 PM

    Your poem really inspiring, bangsa! I hope that you'll get more confident to face all your obstacles. Good luck

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  11. UnknownSeptember 9, 2015 at 9:26 PM

    Your poem really inspiring, bangsa! I hope that you'll get more confident to face all your obstacles. Good luck

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  12. Ajeng Retnaning PalupiSeptember 9, 2015 at 10:09 PM

    Do you know bird?
    Do you like a bird?
    Do you have a bird?
    What the meanig of "bird"?
    How many bird do you have?
    Why did you write poem about bird?
    Am i kepo? '<')/

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 10, 2015 at 4:51 AM

      wow many questions here, okay I'll answer it one by one :)
      yes, of course, who doesn't know bird?
      actually I just like the colors of the feathers
      there's no special meaning of the "bird" actually, it's just like a parable
      just one bird
      I don't know why, I just got inspired of it
      honestly, yes haha no, just kidding! :D
      thanks for the comment and questions Poppy :)

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    2. Ajeng Retnaning PalupiSeptember 11, 2015 at 1:21 AM

      Wooiw.. you really answer my questions.. :'v that's amazing..
      Last question.
      Am i pretty? B-j

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  13. UnknownSeptember 11, 2015 at 8:22 AM

    i like your poem Mega. Your poem is very nice and interesting. i wait next your poem. :)

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 12, 2015 at 6:08 AM

      thanks kharisma, hopefully I can make another poem :D

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  14. UnknownSeptember 13, 2015 at 3:52 AM

    your poem inspire those who read..
    really like your poem Mega ..

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    1. Mega KharismaSeptember 17, 2015 at 2:41 AM

      thankyou vee! this is the second comment right? :p

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  15. It's VSeptember 13, 2015 at 5:29 AM

    Great poem Mega! Keep spirit!

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  16. Yustinus CalvinSeptember 15, 2015 at 11:34 PM

    Keep writing Bunga; hope you learn something from the discussion with your friends
    Thanks Bunga; wish all the best!

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  17. Mega KharismaSeptember 17, 2015 at 2:44 AM

    absolutely yes Pak and best of luck for you!

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